May 25th, 2014 at 4:09 AM
(May 25th, 2014 at 4:01 AM)CapTon Wrote: I've written the first chapter of a book I'm working on feel free to read it by looking at the word doc attached to this post.
Very nice start, I must say that I am impressed. The vocabulary and vivid descriptions are well done. The chapter also ends with a good hook.
Thanks for sharing.