September 18th, 2013 at 11:55 PM
Comments-
Entry # 7-
continuation of excellent descriptions.
I especially really like how you have integrated the elements of weather into the story all along. Also still maintaining the high levels of suspense for the readers. your doing a nice job there also Josh.
Entry # 8
Outstanding character development and interactions. i really think that aspect has been right up there with one of the best elements of the story , since you have started this. perhaps along with descriptive ability.
This part also shows excellent creativity again with your unique concepts of time travel. This is all you and you alone .
Outstanding "Closer" also to this part of course !
I look forward more and more to each subsequent entry
keep going man !!
Entry # 7-
continuation of excellent descriptions.
I especially really like how you have integrated the elements of weather into the story all along. Also still maintaining the high levels of suspense for the readers. your doing a nice job there also Josh.
Entry # 8
Outstanding character development and interactions. i really think that aspect has been right up there with one of the best elements of the story , since you have started this. perhaps along with descriptive ability.
This part also shows excellent creativity again with your unique concepts of time travel. This is all you and you alone .
Outstanding "Closer" also to this part of course !
I look forward more and more to each subsequent entry
keep going man !!
