October 21st, 2013 at 1:17 AM
story comments-
Chapter # 9 -
This was the best chapter so far Josh !
I really enjoyed the descriptions of the creatures. You have also given there personalities as mean and ruthless which i like a lot. the reader is still kept on the edge of their seats, so your doing a great job with this so far, so your doing a great job.
Chapter # 10 -
This part had the most action ini t so far.
Almost non stop action that easily captured the reader's imagination and could hold their attention span.
Great writing skills and I hope it will continue soon Josh !
Chapter # 9 -
This was the best chapter so far Josh !
I really enjoyed the descriptions of the creatures. You have also given there personalities as mean and ruthless which i like a lot. the reader is still kept on the edge of their seats, so your doing a great job with this so far, so your doing a great job.
Chapter # 10 -
This part had the most action ini t so far.
Almost non stop action that easily captured the reader's imagination and could hold their attention span.
Great writing skills and I hope it will continue soon Josh !
