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Wanderers In Time

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Chapter 2- really nice terror scene added to continued good suspense.
Looking Forward to chapter 3.


Chapter 3- really nice descriptive writing in the first part of chapter 3 Josh
very good imagination and creativity in the remaining writing of entry -3

Chapter 4 comments -- Continued nice character formation and originality in this one

Chapter 5-

very scary this shadow !
But as far as the writing , very nice continued Plot development so far.

Chapter 6

Still really good suspense on all fronts josh
You have me on the edge of my seat so far !
Excellent writing and I hope you will be motivated to continue this.
I enjoy this much to this point.


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Wanderers In Time - by Gmdykfuiygh66476 - August 30th, 2013 at 11:52 PM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by brian51 - August 31st, 2013 at 12:07 AM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Darth-Apple - August 31st, 2013 at 12:51 AM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Gmdykfuiygh66476 - August 31st, 2013 at 2:12 AM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Darth-Apple - September 1st, 2013 at 12:56 AM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Gmdykfuiygh66476 - September 1st, 2013 at 3:20 AM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Darth-Apple - September 4th, 2013 at 9:15 PM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Gmdykfuiygh66476 - September 6th, 2013 at 2:47 AM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Darth-Apple - September 7th, 2013 at 4:13 AM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Gmdykfuiygh66476 - September 7th, 2013 at 10:09 PM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Acko - September 8th, 2013 at 6:44 PM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Darth-Apple - September 8th, 2013 at 6:45 PM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Gmdykfuiygh66476 - September 8th, 2013 at 8:41 PM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Acko - September 8th, 2013 at 9:13 PM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by brian51 - September 9th, 2013 at 2:08 AM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Gmdykfuiygh66476 - September 10th, 2013 at 9:22 PM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Acko - September 10th, 2013 at 9:24 PM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Darth-Apple - September 12th, 2013 at 5:21 PM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Gmdykfuiygh66476 - September 18th, 2013 at 10:45 PM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Acko - September 18th, 2013 at 10:53 PM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by brian51 - September 18th, 2013 at 11:55 PM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Gmdykfuiygh66476 - September 29th, 2013 at 10:13 PM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Acko - October 1st, 2013 at 6:20 PM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Darth-Apple - October 5th, 2013 at 9:13 PM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Gmdykfuiygh66476 - October 20th, 2013 at 7:36 AM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Darth-Apple - October 20th, 2013 at 5:00 PM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by brian51 - October 21st, 2013 at 1:17 AM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Acko - October 21st, 2013 at 11:44 AM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Gmdykfuiygh66476 - October 30th, 2013 at 1:01 AM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Acko - October 31st, 2013 at 2:57 AM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by brian51 - October 31st, 2013 at 10:18 AM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Gmdykfuiygh66476 - November 6th, 2013 at 5:47 AM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Darth-Apple - November 6th, 2013 at 7:33 PM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by brian51 - November 8th, 2013 at 2:51 AM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Darth-Apple - November 8th, 2013 at 2:52 AM
RE: Wanderers In Time - by Acko - January 29th, 2014 at 8:47 PM



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