September 9th, 2013 at 2:08 AM
Chapter 2- really nice terror scene added to continued good suspense.
Looking Forward to chapter 3.
Chapter 3- really nice descriptive writing in the first part of chapter 3 Josh
very good imagination and creativity in the remaining writing of entry -3
Chapter 4 comments -- Continued nice character formation and originality in this one
Chapter 5-
very scary this shadow !
But as far as the writing , very nice continued Plot development so far.
Chapter 6
Still really good suspense on all fronts josh
You have me on the edge of my seat so far !
Excellent writing and I hope you will be motivated to continue this.
I enjoy this much to this point.
Looking Forward to chapter 3.
Chapter 3- really nice descriptive writing in the first part of chapter 3 Josh
very good imagination and creativity in the remaining writing of entry -3
Chapter 4 comments -- Continued nice character formation and originality in this one
Chapter 5-
very scary this shadow !
But as far as the writing , very nice continued Plot development so far.
Chapter 6
Still really good suspense on all fronts josh
You have me on the edge of my seat so far !
Excellent writing and I hope you will be motivated to continue this.
I enjoy this much to this point.
