August 14th, 2013 at 12:13 PM
Haha now I'm wondering what happens next. 
Anyway, I think the plot is great, and it definitely captures the reader's attention. I also noticed that there seemed to be a reference to some supernatural elements in the middle, which brings some excitement to the plot. It did feel a little confusing at that part of the plot, but in a lot of ways that brings a good thrilling element to it as well.
I'm looking forward to more.
Anyway, I think the plot is great, and it definitely captures the reader's attention. I also noticed that there seemed to be a reference to some supernatural elements in the middle, which brings some excitement to the plot. It did feel a little confusing at that part of the plot, but in a lot of ways that brings a good thrilling element to it as well.
I'm looking forward to more.
