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[Fiction] The History of Makestation

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The Official History of Makestation - Part One - Rewrite

Rewrite already?!?!?!?!?!!?

        1613 saw the first Simmanian expedition to North America. A crew of approximately six hundred men, aboard two ships, set sail from the port of Chandler. Eventually, the small fleet reached the Delaware Peninsula, and after two years of harsh winters, proclaimed the Town of New Chandler, inside the Colony of Makestation.

        The colony would prove to be a success, as people from all over Simmania would come here looking for a new life. This growth was not exclusive to Simmanians, however; In the course of five years, over 4400 people from around Europe would settle in this peasant haven. The colonists soon adopted their own adjective, naming themselves the 'Creators'



There you have it, guys. A rewrite of this "history" that actually makes sense Tongue. Comment away, I cherish your lovely comments Tongue.
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[Fiction] The History of Makestation - by Acko - September 5th, 2013 at 9:53 PM
RE: The History of Makestation - by Darth-Apple - September 5th, 2013 at 10:12 PM
RE: The History of Makestation - by Acko - September 9th, 2013 at 12:13 AM
RE: The History of Makestation - by Darth-Apple - September 9th, 2013 at 1:07 AM
RE: The History of Makestation - by Acko - September 9th, 2013 at 1:11 AM
RE: The History of Makestation - by Darth-Apple - September 9th, 2013 at 1:12 AM
RE: The History of Makestation - by Acko - September 9th, 2013 at 1:30 AM
RE: The History of Makestation - by Darth-Apple - September 9th, 2013 at 1:31 AM
RE: The History of Makestation - by Gmdykfuiygh66476 - September 9th, 2013 at 2:13 AM
RE: The History of Makestation - by Darth-Apple - September 9th, 2013 at 2:13 AM
RE: The History of Makestation - by simlink - September 9th, 2013 at 5:45 PM
RE: The History of Makestation - by Acko - September 9th, 2013 at 10:56 PM
RE: The History of Makestation - by Darth-Apple - September 9th, 2013 at 10:57 PM
RE: The History of Makestation - by Acko - September 9th, 2013 at 10:57 PM
RE: The History of Makestation - by Damian B. - September 10th, 2013 at 8:36 AM
RE: The History of Makestation - by Acko - September 29th, 2013 at 10:00 PM
RE: The History of Makestation - by Darth-Apple - September 29th, 2013 at 10:06 PM
RE: The History of Makestation - by Darth-Apple - April 12th, 2020 at 3:31 AM
RE: [Fiction] The History of Makestation - by Guardian - April 12th, 2020 at 11:23 PM
RE: [Fiction] The History of Makestation - by Darth-Apple - April 12th, 2020 at 11:37 PM

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